Struggling a bit with the story — feels like it’s all action all the time, short on description and characterization. Plowing ahead anyway — Kait just got lifted off a mile-high bridge by a zeppelin!
Word-o-meter:
UPDATED TO ADD:
Note to self — quit self-editing and WRITE!!!
Tell the story to yourself.
When it’s done, fix it so you can tell it to others, umkay?