Cut out two chapters now, trying to get the original six down to just three tight chapters. I’m trying not to just do a wholesale delete, but I may end up doing that to save time — I get too distracted, trying to save bits that I can just re-draft later, with less effort. I hope.

It’ll all be worth it once we get to the new sections, where everyone is transported to the other world. Then the real wackiness starts.

Oooh — negative wordage again tonight! Tell me it’s okay, would ya?